Several years ago I gathered my courage and showed a selection of my poetry to a local ‘Writer in Residence’. The most powerful message he gave me was to continue writing with my ‘ordinary words’, as I called them. Since then I have been on a journey to continue writing using ordinary words, which come from the heart.
Hippos
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I’m sinking like a hippopotamus
walking on the bottom
water overhead
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I push myself up to the surface
take a great gulp of air
before falling again
.
Gravity pulls me down
I’m too dense too float
filled up with woes
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Down below I wander
make new trails
try to find a way out
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With all my might
I rise to the surface again
thirsty for air
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Then sink, sink, sink
to an in-between place
where sounds are muffled
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There’s a channel I follow
made by an elder
who came before
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This is the way of the hippos
forging underwater laneways
opening up weed beds
allowing ideas to flow
along with fresh currents
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This is the way of the hippos
bringing life in solitary journeys
then gathering in the shallows
to share stories and love
and new ways of being
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By Carys Owen

‘Hippos’ is based on another great animal fact I just learned.
Perhaps you already know that hippos don’t swim- they’re too
dense- so they either hang out in the shallows or walk in the
deeper water, pushing themselves up for air every now and then.
Magnus’s Winter Message

December (Rhagfyr)
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Into the dark
December is here
tightening the belt
before the shortest day
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December is here
we fall into darkness
before the shortest day
not knowing how to fly
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We fall into darkness
and reach for fairy lights
not knowing how to fly
the tar barrel flares
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We reach for fairy lights
tightening the belt
the tar barrel flares
into the dark
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By Carys Owen

Note: this poem is a pantoum- a form that contains echoes
that can transform a simple poem into something lyrical.
Magnus- The Great

Ballad of the Fly Smackers
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He sits in the parlour
playing old-time fiddle
singing songs of the mines
with a voice so true
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Do they hear him?
The tunnels below?
The multitude of miners?
The ones who didn’t come home?
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He sings of hardship
of tunnel collapse
of injury and blackness
of dying and turning to coal
.
I hear it echo
in the underground shafts
down a misty alley
among crooked shacks
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He sings of resilience
of carrying on
of camaraderie
and perseverance
.
Do they hear him?
The tunnels below?
The multitude of miners?
The ones who didn’t come home?
.
He sings of suffering for all
of mothers and children
thrown out on the street
soon as Pa was no more
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I hear it echo
in the underground shafts
down a misty alley
among crooked shacks
.
An age old story
of mining black gold
of extracting riches
for another to hold
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He sits in the parlour
playing old-time fiddle
singing songs of the mines
with a voice so true
.
Do they hear him?
The tunnels below?
The multitude of miners?
The ones who didn’t come home?
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By Carys Owen
Inspired by the band ‘The Fly Smackers’
who played at the Woodstove Festival 2024
in Cumberland BC

Plain Sailing
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Lost at sea, tossed by the waves
seeking safe harbour
I sail through metaphors
to the truth of the matter
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Seeking safe harbour
I follow chart and compass
to the truth of the matter
to the place where words swim free
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I follow chart and compass
keeping my head above water
to the place where words swim free
and my eyes come into focus
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Keeping my head above water
I sail through metaphors
and my eyes come into focus
lost at sea, tossed by the waves
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By Carys Owen
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Today I wrote a pantoum for the dVerse poetry prompt:
‘The prompt for today—write a poem about boats/ships, boating of any sort.’
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Breaking
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Early hip-hop
~ we’re talking early 80’s ~
blares on the boom-box…
…we pass an arm wave
round the circle
holding hands
and laughing
.
I’m working in
a youth centre
~ in my early 20’s ~
trying to connect
with the disconnected
.
They lay down
flattened cardboard
in the middle of the room
crank the music
and take turns
busting a move
popping and locking
three-step into worm
shoulder freeze, shooting star
and head-spin
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‘Go on!’ they shout
‘Have a go!’
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Caught up in the moment
wanting to reach them
I step forward
bow my head
kick up my legs
with no fear
of breaking
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By Carys Owen
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This week’s dVerse poetry prompt: ‘You must simply pen a poem to the theme of dance.’
This brought back a long forgotten memory of some cool teens trying to school a twenty two year old me. Good times!
Fellow trivia nerds will be interested to know that Breaking (Break Dancing) will feature in the 2024 Paris Olympics.

Poetry Prompt
This poem is a departure from my usual style. It was written for a prompt from dVerse Poetics : Write a poem that is a prequel to a particular character from a nursery rhyme, Aesop’s fable, book, or mythology. Be sure it’s clear in the poem, who you’re writing about.
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Fairy Dust
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I was once the most fabulous fairy in the land
with millions of followers on Instagram
and all the magic dust a girl could wish for
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I conjured myself fabulous gowns and
diamond encrusted slippers
fancy tiaras and shimmers for my wings
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Everyone told me how gorgeous I was
how they admired my sparkling beauty
and envied my perfect life
.
But somehow I felt empty and alone
the more I posted, the less I smiled
all my friends were online…were they even real?
.
Then one day I was flying around
~ to be honest I was showing off ~
when I heard someone weeping down below
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Something turned in me and I found myself
alighting by a sad young woman
sitting by a fireplace wearing ragged clothes
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For the first time in ages, I sat
and listened and found myself asking
‘How can I help?’
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The rest is history…
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By Carys Owen
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Shields
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We take the ferry across
as sunlight bounces off the Tyne
looking back we see modern shapes
soften edges of decay
~ old docks resuscitated
once bursting with
fish boats and ship building
.
Toward the river-mouth
we see lifeboats suspended
on cradles ready to go save
mariners in any tide or storm
small fishing fleets anchor
close to shore
and in North Shields
a harbour continues to
offer shelter and home
to trawlers, drifters
inshore seine-netters
.
Corten steel sculptures
narrate the history
of these wharfs
~ a herring girl
holding the catch aloft
her knitting at her side
~ a fisherman at Fiddler’s Green
waiting for the souls of those
lost or wandering
he gazes out to sea in all weathers
growing a coat of rust
built of rain and tears
.
Then back again past
the nets and cable drums
the crab traps and the
fishing floats, the smell
of diesel in the air
and fish and chip
shops getting ready
for the evening rush
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Aboard the ferry
bound for South Shields
as the vessel comes about
we notice the iconic
Herd Groyne Lighthouse
straddling the far distance
no longer needed for
it’s warning signals but
much loved as a sign
of welcome home
.
By Carys Owen
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Written for a poetry prompt from dVerse Poetics: ‘City Love’.
Compared to my rural home on Vancouver Island,
North and South Shields in UK felt like cities to me.
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Owl Offerings
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Barred owl sits on a tree
in broad daylight
noticing
.
She tips her head to
allow her asymmetrical
hearing
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Feathers are ruffled
to warm her as she
waits
.
She glides on hushed wings
and drops her gathered wisdom
in the snow
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By Cary Owen
Written for the prompt ‘Creatures of the blank page’ set by


